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I cannot stand it much longer. It grinds my nerves; drives me to the edge of my sanity, the edge of safety.
It's the way it looks that bothers me so. I do not wish to bear the sight any longer. It looks putrid, slimy, mushy. Like raw sewage, it makes me gag; forces my stomache into convulsions. I would rather go blind than view that horror every night. It is across from me, moving, changing, pushing my towards insanity.
The sights are not the only hell. There are also terrible sounds. The noises are grotesque, like some creature feasting on the dead. The snapping of bones, the tearing of meat reaches my ears constantly. I cannot bear it. Just as i would go blind ather than see it, I wold go deaf to escape the noise.
I ask myself questions. Why must i endure this? Why must I endure this hellish torture, night after night?
Why, oh why, do my brother and sister chew with their mouths open?
It's the way it looks that bothers me so. I do not wish to bear the sight any longer. It looks putrid, slimy, mushy. Like raw sewage, it makes me gag; forces my stomache into convulsions. I would rather go blind than view that horror every night. It is across from me, moving, changing, pushing my towards insanity.
The sights are not the only hell. There are also terrible sounds. The noises are grotesque, like some creature feasting on the dead. The snapping of bones, the tearing of meat reaches my ears constantly. I cannot bear it. Just as i would go blind ather than see it, I wold go deaf to escape the noise.
I ask myself questions. Why must i endure this? Why must I endure this hellish torture, night after night?
Why, oh why, do my brother and sister chew with their mouths open?
this si a story i wrote for my creative writing class. it's supposed to be non-fiction, and in a way it is, but in so many others, it's not
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Really cool!
and....I like the way it starts...as if u are speaking about a postapocalyptic evening....and suddenly....the final line has got the punch line!!!!!!
Really cool!
and....I like the way it starts...as if u are speaking about a postapocalyptic evening....and suddenly....the final line has got the punch line!!!!!!